Item1: Poem
A Small boy and a star
By: John Magliola
A small boy looked at a star
And began to weep
And the star said,
Boy why are you weeping?
And the boy said,
You are so far awayBoy if I were not already in your heart
I will never be able to touch you.
And the star answered,
You would not be able to see me.
And began to weep
And the star said,
Boy why are you weeping?
And the boy said,
You are so far awayBoy if I were not already in your heart
I will never be able to touch you.
And the star answered,
You would not be able to see me.
Rhetorical devices:
Metaphor:
The star: things that people desire to have but often be far-away, out of their reach.
Message: People always want to hold what they want, and when they can’t get it, they think that they’re unhappy without knowing what they’ve got. Sometimes they’re tired of pursuing things that they may never have but still don’t know that they’ve already existed in their heart, that’s enough. True love is no possession.
Item2: Fable
Wanted to share this special story with you.... Like a lot of things in life, it's much easier said than done but this is where faith and perseverance comes in.Once there were three trees on a hill in a woods. They were discussing their hopes and dreams when the first tree said "Someday I hope to be a treasure chest. I could be filled with gold, silver and precious gems. I could be decorated with intricate carving and everyone would see the beauty."
Then the second tree said "Someday I will be a mighty ship. I will take kings and queens across the waters and sail to the corners of the world. Everyone will feel safe in me because of the strength of my hull."
Finally the third tree said. "I want to grow to be the tallest and straightest tree in the forest. People will see me on top of the hill and look up to my branches, and think of the heavens and God and how close to them I am reaching. I will be the greatest tree of all time and people will always remember me.."
After a few years of praying that their dreams would come true, a group of woodsmen came upon the trees. When one came to the first tree he said, "This looks like a strong tree, I think I should be able to sell the wood to a carpenter." and he began cutting it down. The tree was happy, because he knew that the carpenter would make him into a treasure chest.
At the second tree a woodsman said, "This looks like a strong tree, I should be able to sell it to the shipyard." The second tree was happy because he knew he was on his way to becoming a mighty ship.
When the woodsmen came upon the third tree, the tree was frightened because he knew that if they cut him down his dreams would not come true. One of the woodsman said, "I don't need anything special from my tree so I'll take this one" and he cut it down.
When the first tree arrived at the carpenters, he was made into a feed box for animals. He was then placed in a barn and filled with hay. This was not at all what he had prayed for. The second tree was cut and made into a small fishing boat. His dreams of being a mighty ship and carrying kings had come to an end. The third tree was cut into large pieces and left alone in the dark.
The years went by, and the trees forgot about their dreams. Then one day, a man and women came to the barn. She gave birth and they placed the baby in the hay in the feed box that was made from the first tree. The man wished that he could have made a crib for the baby, but this manger would have to do. The tree could feel the importance of this event and knew that it had held the greatest treasure of all time.
Years later, a group of men got in the fishing boat made from the second tree. One of them was tired and went to sleep. While they were out on the water, a great storm arose and the tree didn't think it was strong enough to keep the men safe. The men woke the sleeping man, and he stood and said "peace" and the storm stopped. At this time, the tree knew that it had carried the king of kings in it's boat.
Finally, someone came and got the third tree. It was carried through the streets as the people mocked the man who was carrying it. When they came to a stop, the man was nailed to the tree and raised in the air to die at the top of a hill. When Sunday came, the tree came to realize that it was strong enough to stand at the top of the hill and be as close to God as was possible, because Jesus had been crucified on it.
Message: The moral of this story is that when things don't seem to be going your way, always know that God has a plan for you. If you place your trust in Him, He will give you great gifts. Each of the trees got what they wanted, just not in the way they had imagined.
Source: http://www.rogerknapp.com/inspire/trees3.htm
Item 3: Cartoon
Message: The number of the unemployed is directly proportional to the number of bloggers.
When people have no job, they spend more time on the Internet and write blog. That accounts for the chart above.
Source: http://www.veryfunnycartoons.com/
item 1:
ReplyDeleteRhetorical devices:
personalization: the star can talk to the boy
item 2:
In my opinion,
Rhetorical devices:
personalization: three trees can say and have dreams and feelings like human.
metaphor: trees - people
Message: You should make it shorter and easier to understand.
Although sometimes things seem not to be going your way; if you have faith and perseverance, your dreams will come true.
item 3:
No picture?
Your message is very meaning. I love this poem and this story. However, your message should be shortened in a sentence.
ReplyDeleteHi, I have some comments for you :)
ReplyDeleteItem 1: Rhetorical devices: Personalization and metaphor are combined
Message: People should know what they really want and be happy with what they're able to get
Item 2: Rhetorical devices: You didn't have and I agree with what nhjmxukute gave
Message: I totally with nhjmxu
Item 3: you didn't have picture so I have no comment
I think you can shorten your message so that your entry or exam will be better
Goodluck to u :)
hi, guy! i like your poem. it's so significant! however,the message should be shortened. in addition, personalisation is also poem's rhetorical device as the star and the boy can talk together.i think when we really want to achieve something, we are able to get it by our real efforts, enthusiasm and patience. as for cartoon, i have not seen the image so i don't have any comment.
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