Entry 1
Item 1: Poem [1]
The road not taken
Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth;
Then took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim,
Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
Though as for that passing there
Had worn them really about the same,
And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black.
Oh, I kept the first for another day!
Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
I doubted if I should ever come back.
I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.
v Rhetorical devices:
· Rhyme: wood- stood- could; lay- day- way
· Metaphor: Road (the important opportunity in life); Wood (the life);
v Message:
Each person has courage (“I took the one less traveled by”) and freedom to decide their own path (=chance and destiny). Once he takes a certain road (decision) “that has made all the difference”, he can change the path later but he cannot change the past because it’s too late.
Item 2: the man who went to the Heaven [2]
A man died and because he had been a good person, he went to Heaven, where Saint Peter greeted him at the door.
Welcome! he said. You can enter Heaven right away, but, because you lived such a good life, you can also go and check out Hell first, if you like.
The man was rather curious and said - well, why not - and he went down all the stairs to reach the door of Hell, which opened before him.
Behind the door, he saw many people sitting around tables with delicious food! But they were all very sad, and suffering, because instead of hands they had long knives and forks as arm extensions and they did not manage to put any of this great food in their mouths.
The man went back up to Heaven and said to Saint Peter: Wow, am I glad that I can go to Heaven. That is really some punishment.
Welcome to Heaven, Saint Peter said, as he let the man in.
What did he see there? He saw many people sitting around tables with delicious food, just like in Hell!
And just like in Hell, they also had these long fork and knives extensions on their arms!
But in Heaven, the people weren't crying or cursing, because they were sticking the food in each other's mouths! "Try this", they laughed. "And this!", and they had lots of fun in the process.
Welcome! he said. You can enter Heaven right away, but, because you lived such a good life, you can also go and check out Hell first, if you like.
The man was rather curious and said - well, why not - and he went down all the stairs to reach the door of Hell, which opened before him.
Behind the door, he saw many people sitting around tables with delicious food! But they were all very sad, and suffering, because instead of hands they had long knives and forks as arm extensions and they did not manage to put any of this great food in their mouths.
The man went back up to Heaven and said to Saint Peter: Wow, am I glad that I can go to Heaven. That is really some punishment.
Welcome to Heaven, Saint Peter said, as he let the man in.
What did he see there? He saw many people sitting around tables with delicious food, just like in Hell!
And just like in Hell, they also had these long fork and knives extensions on their arms!
But in Heaven, the people weren't crying or cursing, because they were sticking the food in each other's mouths! "Try this", they laughed. "And this!", and they had lots of fun in the process.
Rhetorical devices:
· A symbol: the Hell (unpleasant situation)
The Heaven (place or state of great happiness)
· Simile and antithesis: the people in Heaven are very optimistic and happy meanwhile ones in Hell are very pessimistic and sad.
Message:
The secret of happiness is making other people happy and you will be taken care as well.
Item 3: [3]
Rhetorical devices:
Irony
Simile: job market is like the fragile wall.
Message:
Hundreds of thousands of students are about to graduate from university and college into unstable job market. (Therefore it causes unemployment)
I am really impressed with your third item, It shows us-student-the fact of being easy unemployed after graduation in unstable job market
ReplyDeleteWhat a nice picture!
In the first item, i think paths in the woods and forks in roads are deep-seated metaphors for the lifeline, its crises and decisions. Particularly, identical forks symbolize for us the nexus of free will and fate
ReplyDeleteI'm quite impressed with your item2. It's a short meaningful story which offers us a new and interesting illustration for Heaven and Hell to transmit a not-new profound message.
ReplyDeleteI like your entry especially your short story. It is exciting. I just like to add something to your rhetorical device used in the poem. From my point of view, there is also simile between two roads through the poem. It can be shown in some verses
ReplyDeleteThen took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim,...
Had worn them really about the same,
in item 3, the author uses onomatopoeia to add vivid sound into the picture by the word "phoom"